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Diar Mery,
Thanks for your letter, it was nice to hear from you again.
In your letter you asked, what special events are marked in our home town. In our city is devoted to a special holiday - the day of victory. On this special day, we give carnations to veterans, sort through photos, and in the evening we go to the fireworks. On this great day, the school organizes a concert for veterans and decorates the room.
I'm sorry, I have to go do my homework.
Love,
Алёна