Небольшой рассказ про обезьяну 2класс,5-6 предложений

Last week my family went to our local zoo. There I saw many funniest animals,but only a monkey called Lila, impressed me very much! Lila is 4 years old. Most of all she prefers tasty bananas. In the zoo she has many friends as tigers,lions,horses . I think I will visit her again

В пред ответе много ошибок очень,но в моем тексте исп времена и конструкции,которые в 2м классе не проходят