Помогите пожалуйста написать сочинение на английском языке о своем памятном дне..( один день ,который запомнился,может один день в парке атракционнов) Спасибо!!!

One day I have been at my friend's birthday,now he is 11.There were:delicious food,lazertag,7d cinema,room of scare(there was really scary).At first we played lazertag,with big lazers,then we ate food:pizza,deserts,cake,then we went to 7d cinema,we watched a very scary film and the last-room of scary,there was so scary,we were shouted very loud.Then we went to home.It was the best day ever!!